※ “Divinity untested is merely an unmeasured variable.”

  For a heartbeat, no one moved.

  Then the crowd began to whisper.

  Not fear.

  Not reverence.

  Something far more dangerous to a priest:

  Curiosity.

  “…She has a point.”

  “She called him a parasite.”

  “Is the Flame taking our coin for… what exactly?”

  “My cousin pays temple tithes every month. Still can’t afford medicine.”

  “Didn’t Halden get a new horse last season?”

  “A white one. Imported.”

  “And we’re supposed to trust him with devotion?”

  Halden spun toward the voices, outrage widening his eyes.

  “You will SILENCE yourselves!” he shouted. “Your faith is your duty! The Flame sustains you!”

  Someone in the back called, “Doesn’t sustain my roof!”

  Another: “Or my husband’s back after temple labor!”

  A third: “If the Flame needs a pyramid to stand, maybe it’s not divine!”

  A ripple of laughter—sharp, nervous, liberating—ran through the market.

  Halden’s face contorted. “You ignorant peasants! You have no idea what burdens the clergy carry! The rituals! The spiritual strain! The—”

  “—coin?” someone offered.

  The crowd snorted. The youngest guard raised a hand to smother a smile and failed.

  Halden pointed at him. “YOU! Maintain order! Arrest anyone slandering the Flame!”

  The guard looked terrified. “S-sir, Captain Varin said observe only—”

  “I AM ABOVE VARIN!” Halden thundered.

  “No,” Lisa said. “You are out of sequence.”

  A pin dropped somewhere.

  Halden’s breath hitched. His anger, denied purchase, twisted into something brittle and frantic.

  “I am the voice of the Sanctified Flame!” he insisted, pounding his chest.

  “The people rely on me! Their souls depend on my intercession! Without the clergy, the Flame would burn them to cinders!”

  A middle-aged woman snorted. “Funny. My grandmother prayed her whole life. Never saw a priest help with anything but asking for more silver.”

  Halden spun, cloak whipping. “Blasphemy! Ignorance!”

  Another man raised a brow. “Then enlighten us. What do we gain?”

  The question struck Halden like a physical blow.

  He opened his mouth.

  Closed it.

  Opened it again.

  “…guidance,” he managed, voice trembling.

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  “We guided ourselves here,” someone murmured.

  “To buy meat,” another added.

  “And now we’re watching you lose an argument.”

  The laughter that followed was not malicious—just free.

  Halden’s authority cracked.

  He turned back to Lisa, desperate now. “Y-you. You are responsible for this. You undermine order. You sow confusion. You— you tempt them away from the Flame!”

  “No,” Lisa said. “I stated definitions.”

  Halden’s jaw clenched hard enough to shake his collar. “Then I will seek guidance. The Flame will expose you for the danger you are.”

  Halden lifted both arms, voice trembling with a mixture of desperation and theatrical fervor.

  “Oh Sanctified Flame, hear your servant. Grant me clarity. Grant me strength. Grant me your presence.”

  The air stilled as if something had already decided to arrive.

  The light changed.

  Not a flicker. Not a reflection.

  A fundamental shift, as if the world had quietly introduced a new color.

  The air thickened with heat. Space tightened. Every sound folded inward. A vibration passed through the crowd like a shared heartbeat. People gasped. Someone dropped a basket. Someone else fell to their knees.

  A column of gold fire spiraled upward, then collapsed inward, forming a shape.

  A man stepped out of the radiance.

  Tall. Perfectly symmetrical. Cloaked in a toga of living flame. Bronze skin, burnished and flawless. Hair that shimmered like molten metal. Eyes bright enough to leave afterimages. Every movement carried the weight of practiced magnificence.

  The crowd trembled.

  Someone whispered that he looked like the heroes of the old epics.

  Someone else whispered that he looked like temptation sculpted into human form.

  A few throats made small, involuntary sounds of awe.

  Halden himself gasped, then straightened with triumphant reverence.

  “My lord,” Halden breathed. “Sanctified Flame incarnate. You have come. You have answered. Guide your faithful servant.”

  The deity did not answer immediately.

  He looked at Halden only long enough to acknowledge him. A flicker of mild recognition. A faint, polite nod.

  Then his gaze shifted to Lisa.

  For a moment, the market forgot to breathe. Even the noise of the distant street fell silent as if the entire city leaned in.

  The Sanctified Flame regarded her with impossible presence, with divine weight, with the kind of authority that could move nations and silence kings.

  Lisa stared back.

  Expression neutral. Breathing steady. Posture unchanged. Unmoved as stone.

  The deity’s eyes narrowed by a fraction.

  Lisa raised one hand and pointed to the side.

  “The end of the line is there.”

  Silence collapsed into astonished disbelief.

  A woman’s jaw dropped so far she forgot to close it.

  A man covered his mouth to stifle a sound halfway between terror and laughter.

  Halden made a choking noise that was not entirely human.

  The god of the Sanctified Flame blinked once.

  A tiny movement.

  Barely perceptible.

  But unmistakably real.

  He looked at the line.

  He looked at Lisa.

  And for the first time since manifesting, his perfect composure cracked just enough to reveal something very rare in divine expression.

  Confusion.

  The Sanctified Flame stood before her, radiance coiling at his feet like molten gold. The heat of his presence pressed against every face in the crowd. Several onlookers dropped to their knees. Others bowed their heads. A few cried openly.

  Halden himself trembled.

  “My lord,” he whispered, “she insulted you. She insulted the sacred order. Judge her. Command me. I am your vessel.”

  The deity raised one hand to quiet him.

  Halden obeyed instantly.

  The Sanctified Flame turned back to Lisa. His voice resonated with layered timbres, a chord more than a single sound.

  “Mortal, you stand before divinity. You will not point. You will not command. You will not question the Flame.”

  Lisa observed him with the same expression she had given onions or rabbit pelts.

  “Define ‘divinity’,” she said.