For those wondering what happend, I deleted chapter 3 and 4 and fuse them with 1 and 2, since they really were 2 short. I also Added a title and a prev next and main menu at the end of each chapter.

  Also, I would apreciate if you guys review, like the reviews alredy done or tell me in the coments what is wrong so i have a better idea of the weak points of the story

  If you stumble upon this narrative on Amazon, it's taken without the author's consent. Report it.

  Finally, there is also a wordpress if you prefer to read it there instead of royal road, since I usually update the 2 at the same time