so, i'm planning on rewriting a few of the chapters, not completely, mind you, but making them more detailed in places where i think i have glossed over major details.

  This will change part of the plot, altough most changes will probably be regarding the time spent in certain places.

  this means that the story will be the same, but i'll be writig out more details about places, actions, and maybe even cultivation.

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  so now, i would like to ask for your opinions on things you think don't fit/could be different/ould be impoved.

  speak now, or forever hold your peace ;)

  p.s. thanks for reading until now, and i hope you'll keep liking the story!