Hey folks!
A few weeks back I finished up the dev edits for book 1, and as of this post going up, I uploaded them. So. If you've already read the story, or you've just started and got here, here's what changed, and here's what you should expected from the chapters of book 2:
- Henry is a bit less wishy-washy in the handful of early chapter. Still scared-shitless and panicked, but there were a couple of instance where he was just being extremely stupid to the point where it broke the immersion for some people. Those are fixed.
- The magic system is a bit less obfuscated. The System (the dude) is also more communicative about the current setup, and Henry is warned in advance that the Aspects are coming in the next few evolution, and that the first interface/setup Henry gets is like the training-wheels version. This way, the change is not as sudden as some have experienced.
A case of theft: this story is not rightfully on Amazon; if you spot it, report the violation.
- The point-buying system is simplified: It's all accessible now from the get go. You get five points priced by rank (aka 5 each that cost F-tokens, then 5 that cost E-tokens, etc).
- Formatting/consistency fix in the system prompts/notifications.
Which leads me to this: Book 2 has not been dev-edited yet. You might notice some skill and point discrepancies (small ones that won't affect the story), and those will be fixed. The formatting might be off as well in some parts, but bear with me. In a couple of months, I'll start editing and everything will become consistent.
As always, thanks for reading my story, and huge cheers to everyone who helped me out on Patreon. See you Wednesday!
PS: Moving this one so it's visible right before book 2 starts