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Fantasy story about a magician named Ed and how he manages to to find himself in a world domination plot years in the making. This is my first time writing a story so any/all criticism is appreciated. I will use those as a basis to improve my writing. Thank you in advance. Statistics Overall Score .star-4719-overall-0c4cb30a22a94e54a7e4037fce4bb77b:after{ width: 0% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 3,615 Average Views : 904 Followers : 0 Favorites : 1 Ratings : 0 Pages : 11 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author